Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Butterfly

By Ella
I was working in the garden and I saw a treasure chest!

I opened it and I saw MILLIONS of beautiful gems then something really weird happened!

My mom caught a butterfly that looked like it had eyes on it then its two real eyes winked at me so I think it seemed magical (and it was, well, that's what I thought).
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3 comments:

  1. Stony Point 3rd GradersNovember 28, 2011 at 5:16 AM

    I like how you put a lot of detail in your story.

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  2. Stony Point 3rd GradersNovember 28, 2011 at 5:24 AM

    i like how you put the word millon in your story instead of saying lots!

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  3. Stony Point 3rd GradersNovember 28, 2011 at 5:25 AM

    i like how you said what you were doing i the graden

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